Outline
1. Plan your letter. Think of your three goals. Write a topic sentence for each one.
- Goal 1 : be a good person for everyone
- Goal 2 : learn and speak English well and correctly
- Goal 3 : graduate as soon as possible
In
short, I have set three future goals for my life and I should achieve all of
it. I think that being a good person for everyone is the important things
in this life. Because we are a human. We can live without other people, so we
need to respect each other and being a person who is liked of everyone. Therefore,
I will concentrate on my first goal. As a result, without achieve the first
goals, I think that I will incapable to attain the second and third goal.
Dear Me,
This
is an article I am writing to me, myself, with three future goals in it. I
will open this article in four years and decide whether or not I have achieved
these goals. The goals I have set for myself are to learn and speak English well and correctly, be a good person for everyone, and graduate as
soon as possible. Let’s look at why I chose these goals and steps to take my three goals.
First
of all, my goal is to be a good person for everyone. As the Great King of
Thailand from June 9th, 1946 until October 13th, 2016, Bhumibol
Adulyadej said “A good person can make another person good; it means
that goodness will elicit goodness in the society; other persons will also be
good.” In order to achieve this goal which is be a good person, I
will help my friends when they need a help. For instance, help them to
finish the assignment, teach the business mathematics subject, and else. Then
every day, I will come to the class on time or before lecturers. Also
right now, I would respect each others without depend on religion, race,
skin color or culture and background.
Secondly,
I would like to learn and speak English well and correctly. According to
Wikipedia, right now, one of the most widely spoken and fastest spreading
world languages today is English,
which has over 900 million first- and second-language users
worldwide. It is estimated to have as many as 600 million second-language
speakers, including anywhere between 200 and 350 million learners/users in
China alone, at varying levels of study and proficiency, though this number is
difficult to accurately assess. Because of that, we need to know even
speak English very well. Every day I will try to speak English at all times
as well as possible. This month, I plan either to study hard in English
1 and English 2 subject and get a good score. Furthermore, I will not
afraid to talk with foreigners and lecturers.
The
last but not least, I want to graduate as soon as possible. Many people include my
boyfriend said, “Gloria, you have to study hard in order to rapidly passed
and immediately find a job. Therefore, you can make your parents proud of you.”
Actually, in order to achieve this goal, I enter to President University
because when I studied at University
President, I have a greater opportunity to graduate as soon as possible. In addition, it will be supported with
study hard, being a good students and also do the assignment on time. My plan
for next year, I will study harder, respect more to the lecturers, and
never be late to submit the assignment.
In
short, I have set three future goals for my life and I should achieve all of
it. I think that being a good person for everyone is the important things
in this life. Because we are a human. We can live without other people, so we
need to respect each other and being a person who is liked of everyone. Therefore,
I will concentrate on my first goal. As a result, without achieve the first
goals, I think that I will incapable to attain the second and third goal.

Haii gloo, You explained your opinion so very well. Everything is in order and I can easily understand what you meant :)
ReplyDeleteHi, Gloria, your article is very amazing. Your article is nicely structured. It's great that you put a quote and a fact inside your article. You connect your article effectively.
ReplyDeleteYou have a great way to express your words into appropriate style of writing.
I think this sentence create misunderstanding: I want to graduate as soon
I think you mean: I want to graduate as soon as possible or I want to graduate soon
Good job and keep it up🙂 Thank you :)
Hi, Gloria!
ReplyDeleteyou have a good article. Your article is good in position. It's easay to me to understand.
But I think will be better if you make more example. It will be interest to read your article.
Good job😊
Hi glo,
ReplyDeleteI think it will be better if you changed this sentence "Because of it, we need to know even speak English well" to "Because of that, we need to know even speak English very well" . it will maked your stories more strange then before
Hi glo, your article is very interesting. Here my suggestion
ReplyDeleteI think you may change "The goals I have set which are be able to speak English fluently, being role model in our surroundings , and graduate as soon as possible ,also.
Dear Glo,
ReplyDeleteto be honest, I find your second goal very interesting. I think it is rare to find someone really trying to be a good person for everyone and in fact, you're a nice person. :) I hope you are bestowed many blessings.
Your article is easy to understand and I love the quote you typed there. Nice point to make your article more interesting to read.
It is also well structured. I think 'English good' in the first paragraph should be 'English well'. Don't forget to type also the steps like what we usually did in the previous articles. Well done and thank you.
Wow your goals is very good. i like your article also. your grammar and structure of all paragraph is nice. i think your english is improved. my suggestion for you is do your best, glo
ReplyDeleteHi Glo, it hard to find any mistake in your paragraph about grammar and also the structure. I hope you can finish your goals as soon as you can. Good luck!
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ReplyDeleteGloria, i like your article. From your article i know that your hard worker because you want to reach all of you goals. To be kind person is hard glo, so many things can distrub you but i believe that you always with God that can help you. I see that you have good grammar and the structure. You know, sometime i pay attention in my grammar but not to detail as you do.
ReplyDeletewow very beautiful dreams :)
ReplyDeleteI am sure you can reach it all
keep trying and do your best :)
I can understand your article really well,I think you already use a wide variety of vocabulary and grammar structure
you express your ideas clearly and effectively and you use an appropriate style and formal enough
btw I think " Right now, one of the most widely spoken and fastest spreading world languages today is English" much better i think if you change it to be "Right now, one of the most widely spoken and fastest spreading world languages is English"
Thankyou
have a good day glo :*
Hello baby, you are smart and brilliant girl , you can reach reach your dream, overall please pay attention for the structure. :)
ReplyDeleteHi, Glo. You article is good. You have a nice goals, actually. Hoping that you can achieve all of that :)
ReplyDeleteYou passed the idea very clearly and managed to connect each of paragraphs effectively.
Your vocabularies is wide enough and the structures is also good.
But, I spot a little mistake, I don't know whether it is right or not but I just want to tell this. OK, the sentence on fourth para, " I plan for next year, I will study harder, respect more to the lecturers, and never be late to submit the assignment." I think it would be better if you change to " My plan for next year, I will study harder, respect more to the lecturers, and never be late to submit the assignment."
Thank you.
Hello,it is easy for me to understand your paragraph.It is very good.we have one common goals,learn English,I want to learn it well.Your vocabulary and grammar are very good.We can learn together.You connect this article very efficiently.Fighting.
ReplyDeleteHi glo, your article is easy to read. i feel confort when i read your article because i find the truth idea. your article is good, you can combine all to be perfect, your grammar is very good and also your vocabulary. you connect every sentence very well.
ReplyDeletethats all form me.
keep it up!
Hi Gloria...
ReplyDeleteit's a nice article about your personal goal. I hope that you can accomplish within 4 years. Overall, I think your article is good. Maybe you should recheck in paragraph 2. should be" Also right now, I would respect each other without depending on religion, race, skin color or culture and background."
thank you
Hi Gloria
ReplyDeleteIt's a good article, your grammar and sturucture also. I like your way to describe each idea from each paragraph because it's clearly and easy to me to understand the meaning. by the way I found the error sentences on Paragraph 2 like " In order to achieve this goal which is be a good person, I will help my friends when they need a help." I think it woulld be better if you changes the sentence to " In order to achieve this goal which is a good person, I will help my friends when they need a help." and also "I would respect each others" to "I would respect each other". That's all from me.
Thank You
Hi glo!
ReplyDeleteMaybe you can change "graduated soon" to " graduate soon"
But, your article is easy to read.you express your ideas clearly and effectively and you use an appropriate style and formal enough .
Fighting!
Hi gloria!
ReplyDeleteThat’s a good article and I can easily understand it. You connect your paragraph very good. your writing skill is good. Keep practicing
Good job😊