An Important Event in My Life

Outline 
 
1. Plan your composition about an important event in your life. Write the introductory paragraph and include an attention getter, the main idea of the composition, and the guide.

• Attention getter :  The world was fallen down in front of me
• Main idea : I never thought that my father would pass away so fast, but he did, and that event changed me and my family completely. 
• The guide : In this article, I will tell you about what my life was like before, why I decided to change, and what my life now is like.

2. Write topic sentences for your second, third, and fourth paragraphs.

• Second paragraph : It was as if I had just wasted my time with my family
  
• Third paragraph : Then one day, my father got sick
• Fourth paragraph : From then on, I have become independent

When My Beloved Father Dies

    

     Have you ever imagined about the end of the world? At the time finally I know how it's happened. The world was fallen down in front of me. Someone whom I loved in this world had disappointed me. I never thought that my father would pass away so fast, but he did, and that event changed me and my family completely. In this article, I will tell you about what my life was like before, why I decided to change, and what my life now is like.
    I am the older of two sisters. As an older sister, I found that I was scolded more often than my sister. My father used to say that I had to succumb because I was more mature. I was very upset to hear such an expression. I thought that my father loved my sister more than me. Therefore, I often cuddled up to my mother even for the slightest thing; for example, I used to ask my mother to help me take some food when I was hungry. I was not concerned at all with how they felt, what they thought, and what their problem was at that time. It was as if I had just wasted my time with my family. 
     Then one day, my father got sick. When he got really sick, he used to ask me to massage his feet. Sometimes I ignored his request because of my busy days at school but I did massage his feet. And I really recognized how my father had suffered from the pains because of his severe disease. I squeezed my mother gently and asked her what I had to do then. I also saw how she painstakingly cared for my father. My sister and I had to be independent. I didn't want to add to my parents’ burdens with my spoiled attitudes any longer. So, a few times I  did some homework just as my mom used to do. One year later, my father actually passed away. My family suffered for a long time and my family’s income decreased. My mother found it difficult to pay for my school fee and my sister’s school fee. Usually, my father used to teach when he wanted to arrange a school examination, and it was already gone. Therefore, at that trying period of time at my school, once my rank declined. It seemed there had been no hope anymore. However, I was encouraged by my family and close relatives. And my family eventually started to bounce back. 
    From then on, I have become independent. I have learned how to tell anyone else not to take food or clean up the bed. I have bounced back from previous adverse conditions. Then again, I got back the best rank at school. I have learned to love my family more than anything in this world. Since then, our family has become stronger than it was beforehand. It seems to me that there is no problem in this world that cannot be solved. Thank you my father. You have left something that can never be exchanged by even a diamond or whatever it is. Love your family.

My Hometown, Manado

My Favourite Restaurant

Trash : The Biggest Problem in Jakarta

Problem and Solution Essay 

1. Introduction 

2. Writing about Problems :

    - The main problems are discussed only one but the sub problem actually more than
      one which are health problems, damage the Earth's atmosphere, and flood.

    - That's problem about trash.

    - The expression that I used to introduce the problems is trash is one of the many
       social problem facing the people of Jakarta. (bold)

    - I illustrated the problems further with shows the result of kompas.com, the causes
      of trash problem, and the impact of the trash problem. (underlined)

    - The results are discussed for each paragraph is we must doing something to solve
      that problem. (italic)

 

3. Writing about Solutions :

     - I give three solution of the problem.

     - They are make a garbage bank, 4R (reuse, reduce, recycle, and replace),
       grouping the trash. (bold)

     - The groups of people does the writer say are responsible for these solutions are
       family, society, and the government. (underlined)

     - The solutions will be implemented with the family must teach the members of
       family itself to do not littering, the society have to pay attention to grouping the
       trash into the right group, and the government need to make a garbage bank and
       make a socialization about the 4R. (underlined)

     - The modal verbs structures are used to make the suggestions are must, have to, need
       to underlined)

4. Conclusion  

Trash : The Biggest Problem in Jakarta

(Introduction)     

     Jakarta is the capital city of Indonesia where I live. As capital of the State, Jakarta would be a major point of doing any activity. Various problems also appear in Jakarta. One of them is trash. Trash is not a new thing for us. Junk is sort of dirt, a pile of waste, collection of various objects that have been discarded.

(Problems) 
     Trash is one of the many social problems facing the people of Jakarta. According to Kompas.com on January 8th, 2016 explains that the problems of the most complained resident of Jakarta is the waste problem. Trash problems accounting for 24.1% of other problems in Jakarta such as congestion, floods, and fires, each of which only 7.4%, 4.5 % and 1.5%. Trash certainly caused by human beings themselves. The influence of the environment is a major factor in the emergence of a behavior. For example, environmental influences such as littering will be a major factor in the emergence of the behavior of littering. Trash can cause other problems. For example trash can bring disastrous consequences for public health if they are not insurmountable. If the waste is disposed or stacked haphazardly without proper management, it will cause a variety of health problems that occur in communities like diarrhea, cholera, and typhoid. Trash can also cause global warming because the waste can produce methane (CH4), which can damage the Earth's atmosphere. Besides, waste dumped carelessly, one of which is discharged into rivers or other waterways over time will accumulate and block the flow of water, so water cannot flow smoothly and will overflow causing flooding. Because of it, we as the members of Indonesia must doing something to solve that problems.


(Solutions) 
      To solve the problems of trash in Jakarta, we have many solutions like make a garbage bank, 4R (reuse, reduce, recycle, and replace), grouping the trash. For instance, in my hometown, there is an organization called the garbage bank. The purpose of waste bank is to reduce waste by saving garbage. When we save the garbage there, the garbage will be turn into a money. Then the garbage man will take it and pay with a rather expensive price. The rest will be given to people who saved up garbage in the garbage bank. We can also apply the 4R which are reuse, reduce, recycle and replace. Reuse, reduce and recycle means that to reuse waste that has been used to create other useful items like crafts, reduce the consumption of somethings so the waste will be reduced as well, and process waste into useful new items. Replace means that replace the items  that are not durable and can produce a lot of trash into a items that is durable. For example you should replace the glass cup into the plastic cup to avoid when the cup is broken. And the last but not least, we must grouping the trash into the right group like organic trash, inorganic trash, etc. All of the society must be participate to solve this problems. For example, the family must teach the members of family itself to do not littering, the society have to pay attention to grouping the  trash into the right group, and the government need to make a garbage bank and make a socialization about the 4R (reduce, reuse, recycle and replace).

(Conclusion)
      In conclusion, trash is a problem that we need to tackle together with implementing solutions above. not only the government, but start from ourselves. Everyone should be aware of the impact from the garbage itself. Let's make the environment where you live into a healthy, comfortable, and beautiful to dispose of waste in place.

Marry : The Winner of Nobel Prize in Physiology or Medicine 2016

Outline
 
1. Plan your magazine article about your partner's future success. Your article will have paragraphs similar to the first, second, and third paragraphs of the example in Part 6. Write a topic sentence for each paragraph. Then list facts or examples to support your topic sentences. (If you do not have enough details from your interview, make up some more yourself!)
     - Paragraph 1 : what Marry is doing today

• Topic sentence : Marry is the most famous internist in the world
• Facts or examples : She is popular with president or the most influential people in the world and did a lot of research about the internal diseases and it was very useful for the medical world.

      - Paragraph 2 : the road to success

• Topic sentence : Marry has been leader of biology club since he was in Junior High School.
• Facts or examples : She and her team are always won in the biology competition at the national level even the international level even get a scholarship from Harvard University and she continued her study in that college.

      - Paragraph 3 : two characteristics that led to success

• Topic sentence : Marry has two characteristic that helped make her an amazing internist.
• Facts or examples : she is an intelligent person and a hard worker.

 

Marry :  The Winner of Nobel Prize in Physiology or Medicine 2016

   

    Marry is the most famous internist in the world. She is popular with president or the most influential people in the world. In addition, she did a lot of research about the internal diseases and it was very useful for the medical world. Therefore, it is no surprise that she won this year's The Nobel Prize in Physiology or Medicine.

     Marry has been leader of biology club since he was in Junior High School. She and her team are always won in the biology competition at the national level even the international level. After graduating in Senior High School, she get a scholarship from Harvard University and she continued her study in that college. One thing that she say that still keep in my mind, “Don't be afraid to be a successful person. Don't be afraid of life. Your life is yours.” Marry finished her study only two years in the Medical Faculty of Harvard University. One month after graduated, she works in John Hopkins Medicine Baltimore, Maryland, United States of America.  

    Marry has two characteristic that helped make her an amazing internist. First of all, she is an intelligent person. Her intelligence quotient is one of the highest in this world that is 220 same with Leonardo Da Vinci. She always get the first ranking since elementary school until graduated from Harvard University. Second, she is a hard worker. When I visit in her house, she always study and study. She said that study is the important thing to be success. Because of these two important characteristics, Marry can be the best internist in our country even in the world.