The Next Bank Employee

Outline 
 
1. Plan your composition about an appropriate career for your partner.

• Finish the sentence about your parner.

I think Dwen would make a good Bank Employee

• In the chart below, write three reasons why you think so and some supporting points for each.

 

	Paragraph 2	Paragraph 3	Paragraph 4
Main Idea	Good at mathematics	Being logical	Want to working indoors
Supporting Point (s)	Always be active when our ‘mathematics business’ lecturer come to our class and will teach us this subject	She is good at logical thinking like  good at scientific investigations and identifying relationships between different things.	She is a woman that always care about her skin and always make a hand-body lotion to make her skin good.

• Now, write a short introductory paragraph, like the first paragraph in Part 6

Dwen is my good friend. She is good at mathematics, being logical, and wants to working indoors. Therefore, Dwen would be an amazing bank employee. 

2. Write a topic sentence for each of your main ideas.

• First of all, Dwen is good at mathematics.  
• Being logical is the second reason why Dwen would be a good bank employee. 
• Finally, Dwen is person who want to working indoors.

The Next Bank Employee

      Dwen is my good friend. She is good at mathematics, being logical, and wants to working indoors. Therefore, Dwen would be an amazing bank employee.

     First of all, Dwen is good at mathematics. For example, she always be active when our ‘mathematics business’ lecturer come to our class and will teach us this subject. Furthermore, she always gets good score in ‘mathematics business’ and ‘financial accounting’ subject also. I think she would make an amazing bank employee because of these qualities.

     Being logical is the second reason why Dwen would be a good bank employee. She’s also good at numbers. For instance, she is good at logical thinking likes  good at scientific investigations and identifying relationships between different things. She's also good at understanding complex and abstract ideas.
      Finally, Dwen is person who want to working indoors. She is a woman that always care about her skin and always make a hand-body lotion to make her skin good. Besides that, Dwen very scare about animal. She always scream when she’s meet with animal especially cat and dog. Because of that, she will be better working indoors.