Outline
1. Plan your research report about your classmates. Look back at the groups you created in Part 4. Each group will be the topic of a paragraph. Write a topic sentence for each of the three or four groups you made.
- Paragraph 2 : The type with the largest number of students in my class which is almost half the Management-2 is “Parent’s Wishes” type.
- Paragraph 3 : The “Confused” type is the second of the smallest number of students that have been choose
- Paragraph 4 : The second type with the largest number of students in Management-2 is “Egoist” type.
2. Write a draft of the concluding paragraph for your composition. It can either summarize or evaluate the results, or it can predict the future.
In
conclusion, the “Egoist” people have the clear reason from their self,
but what will happen to the “Parent’s Wishes” people or “Confused”
people? Will they stay at President University to study, or resign from
President University and change into the other college? I think that
most of them will resign as my two-friend in Management-2 class because
it is not their real reason and passion. It is just because of other
person or perforce even if they want to stay and study at President
University, I think that they will not be happy and peace.
Why the people choose President University as their college? What actually the real reasons that make them to study at President University is? Is it because of their parents or the ability of President University itself? To find out the answer, I conducted a research and asked to each of my classmates what she or he reasons to choose President University as their place to study and live. After looking over their answers, I realized that there are three types of students in my class, Management-2. There are the “Parent’s Wishes” type, the “Confused” type, and the “Egoist” type.
The type with the largest number of students in my class which is almost half the Management-2 is “Parent’s Wishes” type. When I asked them about the reason why them study at President University, they answer that obey to loyal with their parents is the first reason. Many students in President University say that they study at President University which is the international university in Indonesia because of their parent’s wishes. Actually, they have a college or university that they like to studied but because they love their parents, finally they choose President University.
The second type with the largest number of students in Management-2 is “Egoist” type. There are so many students in President University says that, “It’s my dream university”, or “President University is the first choice college that I love because President University have a lot of benefit in the future”. Therefore, the reason why they study at President University is about their dream.
The “Confused” type is the second of the smallest number of students that have been choose. There are so many students in Management-2 class that study at President University because they are confused about the university that they want to study. They do not know where they going after graduation at the Senior High School. Therefore, in the others name, they study at President University because they confused about it.
The third type with the smallest number of students in Management-2 is “Egoist” type. They say, “It’s my dream university”, or “President University is the first choice college that I love because President University have a lot of benefit in the future”. Therefore, the reason why they study at President University is about themselves.
In conclusion, the “Egoist” people have the clear reason from their self, but what will happen to the “Parent’s Wishes” people or “Confused” people? Will they stay at President University to study, or resign from President University and change into the other college? I think that most of them will resign as my two-friend in Management-2 class because it is not their real reason and passion. It is just because of other person or perforce even if they want to stay and study at President University, I think that they will not be happy and peace.

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