Outline
1. Plan your paragraph about the things you like to do.
- What's your main topic? Write it here : three foods that I like to eat
- What are your subtopics? Write them here : chicken satay - tinutuan - fried chicken
2. Now write a paragraph like the one on Page 6. Underline the topic sentence.
There are three foods that I like to eat. The first
food is chicken satay. Satay is a dish of seasoned, skewered and grilled meat served with a sauce. I like satay because it's delicious food and the sauce is spicy. Anyway, satay is my favorite food because it's also not expensive so I often eat this food whenever I want to eat it. The second food I
like to eat is tinutuan. Tinutuan is porridge from my hometown, Manado. This
food consists of pumpkin and sweet potato or cassava cooked up into a pulp,
which is then mixed with corn kernels and various leafy vegetables such as
water spinach, lemon basil, and spinach. I love to eat tinutuan because it’s very healthy and delicious
food. Fried chicken is my third favorite food. Fried chicken consists of
chicken meat and flour. I like fried chicken because it's very delicious and simple food, so I can cook it when I want to
eat. Sometimes, I eat chicken satay, tinutuan, and fried chicken for one day
because the foods are not expensive. So, how about you? What's your favorite food?
Hi, GLoria. This is a very interesting paragraph. It makes me feel hungry, hahaha. I think this line: 'Satay is a dish of seasoned, skewered and grilled meat, and served with a sauce.' would be better this way: 'Satay is a dish of seasoned, skewered and grilled meat served with a sauce.' This is a great paragraph, keep it up :)
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Hello, Bren
DeleteHaha... You're right. It's also make me hungry. Anyway, thank you for your suggest. I'll keep it and have a good day
Hello there. It's a good story you have. Thanks for sharing. I like chicken satay too. It's cheap yet appetizing. Also, it's nice for me to find someone who cares about health since people nowadays start to care less. Btw, I wonder if there are some reasons other than their taste which make you love to eat them. After all, well done, Glo.
ReplyDeleteHi, Audrey. Thank you for visit my blog and your suggest also. I'll keep it and have a good day
DeleteWhat you describe looks very delicious。Thank you give me these great information to tastr new food。I want to eat now。
ReplyDeleteHi Hanna
DeleteYou're welcome. I'll give you the food later on. Have a good day
Hi Gloria.. Thank you for sharing those 3 kind of foods, it leads me into the imagination and now particularly I am hungry :') Moreover i'd like to eat the Tinutuan... i have never been eat it before. May be for the next time you can make the review on how to make Tinutuan ,thus I can learn to make it in my home ^^
ReplyDeleteHello, Yuli
DeleteI very glad if you want to learn make tinutuan. I'll help you if you have trouble. It's the steps how you make it. Just visit the link bellow :
http://www.foodsweety.com/2015/01/making-easy-tinutuan-recipe.html
Thank you for your comment and have a nice day
Wow gloria! Thank you for sharing. Your post makes me really want to teaste the tinutuan. I love your way to describe it
ReplyDeleteHi Lidia
DeleteYou're welcome. Okay, I'll give you tinutuan when I come back to my hometown. By the way thank you to visit my blog and I waiting for your paragraph also. Good luck, my friend
Now i really want to try Tinutuan because it seems really delicous, by the way NICE article and keep it up
ReplyDeleteHello Eximus
DeleteAs my gratitude to you who have seen my blog and comment it, I'll give you tinutuan later on. Thank you for your appreciation and I'll keep it up. Good luck and have a nice day, my best friend in the world
I red these when i'm hungry and you know,when i saw a pen, it's like chiken satay.By the way this is good structure glo
ReplyDeleteHi Martin
DeleteReally? Haha..
I'll paid a chicken satay to you whenever you want
By the way, thank you to visit and comment to my blog
I love eating those foods too! Anyway keep up the good work!
ReplyDeleteHello Albee
DeleteSo you have same taste with me
Thank you for visit my blog. Have a nice day
hai glo, your blog is making me hungry hahaha
ReplyDeleteHello Ayu
DeleteAbsolutely, because it's delicious foods
Anyway, thank you to visit my blog
hi Glo
ReplyDeleteThe article is make me hugry and want to eat more, Yummy the food is delicious, i very like satay too
Hello Yoshua
DeleteWah, I glad to make you eat more :D
hello gloo it is a good paragraph and you were success to make me feel so hungry right now -_-
ReplyDeletehaha keep writing girl :*
Hi Ima
DeleteHahaha.. I proud to make you so hungry, anyway :D
Okay girl. Have a nice day and never give up
You're success to make me hungry, after this I'll find those foods..
ReplyDeleteKeep do your best, fighting
Hello Dandy
DeleteHaha.. Okay, if you want, I'll provide those foods to you. Thank you for visit and comment my blog and have a good day
Hi Glo, could you bring me some of those foods? because I'm feeling hungry right now right after I read your story xD
ReplyDeleteBy the way nice information about your hometown dish. I'd love to have a taste of it because it sounds very healthy and yummy food :)
Hello Luisa
DeleteOf course. I'll come back to my hometown on 10th October, so I'll bring Tinutuan and taste it to you. Anyway, thank you to visit my blog and have a nice day
Foods are everywhere. Love this article!
ReplyDeleteHi Vina
DeleteHaha.. Thank you for your comment and I love your article also
WOW AMAZING
ReplyDeleteThank you very much, Haviz
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